Group: Shana, Andrea & Generra
We decided to use the paper that Andrea wrote for the assignment. These are our ideas and comments so far:
Question:What features of the comments give information for the revision of the paper?
Coding of the Comments:
- No negative comments, but positive feedback.
- Supports the student in a positive manner.
- Encourages the student to keep writing and edit where necessary, without being aggressive.
- Gives examples of soucres that can be used.
- Explains what needs work and follows up with how to "fix" the revision.
Andrea - This was my paper that we were working on. I did not have any hard feelings about the comments from my professor. I thought I was doing the assignment wrong, but I was assured that I was not, and it gave me hope that I will complete the paper without worrying to much about it. To me it was all positive feedback.
Shana - Based from experience, Andrea & I both have had this professor for two classes last semester. Therefore, I noticed that many of his comments followed a similar format when he edited my papers last semester. For example, he does not say anything negative, but he does provide feedback to improve a point being made. Another key thing I noticed was that he had given me many of examples that I could have used in my paper to make it stronger, which is similar what he did here for Andrea's paper as well. Comments like these make me want to edit a paper rather than just write to finish it and satisfy the requirements. We all had similar reactions when speaking about Andrea's paper.
Generra -
Pose a Question:
Shana - Based from experience, Andrea & I both have had this professor for two classes last semester. Therefore, I noticed that many of his comments followed a similar format when he edited my papers last semester. For example, he does not say anything negative, but he does provide feedback to improve a point being made. Another key thing I noticed was that he had given me many of examples that I could have used in my paper to make it stronger, which is similar what he did here for Andrea's paper as well. Comments like these make me want to edit a paper rather than just write to finish it and satisfy the requirements. We all had similar reactions when speaking about Andrea's paper.
Generra -
Pose a Question:
We did not get this far yet. We have no question as of today.
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