I feel like I have a lot to work on, from my introduction, to organization, to my research. I feel over time I will feel more confident with my paper as time goes on and we work on each part separately in class.
1.) I need to work on a stronger introduction, where I give information that is related to my topic. This will help to introduce my topic/research question. I feel like I should create an outline as it will help better organize my thoughts better. In my short analysis I did open my introduction paragraph with an interesting thought, but I feel like it should have related to my question better. Therefore, I need to make sure that my introduction is interesting and it intertwines with my question.
2.) I learned that I need to speak more about my data/observation. In doing so, I am giving my readers a sense of what my observations prove. In my short analysis, my chart describes the complexity of comments and I should explain my chart in full details. In terms of my research project, I can make a chart or another form to represent my findings when conducting my research.
3.) I need to work on my organization better. I need to make sure that the information I say, fits where I put it. I noticed that throughout my analysis I put information in a spot where it did not necessarily belong. I may find it beneficial to create an outline so my thoughts are in the right paragraphs. For my research project, I need to pay close attention where I put my information, otherwise it may throw my important ideas off.
4.) I need to explain how I came to my conclusions. I give a lot of good information based on my observations and ideas. I need to give a detailed description of how I arrived at my conclusions. I just need to apply them to my question better in my conclusion. For my research project, I need to be sure to do just this by connecting my observations to my descriptions.
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