Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Blog 22

Blog #22:  Post your data so far.  If you have not yet collected your data = post as soon as your data is available.  

Female Subject:
Basic Questions
S: What is your name?
M: Merri Giannotto.
S: What is your gender?
M: Female

S: How old are you, if I may ask?
M: fifty years old.
S: And what is your race?
M: White

Meeting for the first time:
S:  What did you imagine your future husband/wife to be when you were a child?
M:  (laughing) nothing what I got.  As a child you think you are going to find your prince charming, not knowing there is no such man. Growing up in the Brady Bunch era you think your husband will look and be like Mike Brady.  Ok, I dreamed a lot.
S:  So, did you date anyone else before meeting one another?  Why or why not?
M:  Being so young, I didn’t date that much.  Had a few dates if you could even call them dates.  Like, back in the day we called it just hanging out.  Is it still called that?  (laughing)
S:  Okay, so how did you meet one another?
M:  We met at a party in high school.  (rolling eyes)
S:  How old were you?
M: I was a baby, 14 years old!
S:  And what were your first impressions upon meeting him?
M:  My first impressions were ewwwwwww not for me!  (eyebrow raise)
S:  Can you tell me a particular story about meeting him for the first time?
M:  At this party the girls were going to cook for the boys.  I made macaroni salad, being 14 years old mind you, never made this before.  Of course my mother helped me make it.  I heard someone at the party asking who made the macaroni salad and then heard before I could even reply saying it was dry.  Well, annoyed and not even know who this person was, or why they were at this party.  I yelled if you don’t like it don’t eat it.  Not a great first impression was it?
S:  And how did that make you feel?
M:  Made me feel great to yell.  Like really how dear you complain you mean person…(laughing)
S:  How do you think your husband/wife felt upon meeting for the first time?
M:  I felt just fine, think I scared him to death the way I yelled.
S: So, what did you learn or take from meeting for the first time compared to being together now?
M:  People should not go to places they are not invited to and be rude. (laughing)
S:  That’s true! So, what else do you remember about first meeting?
M:  I was friends with his brother who was in my social studies class.  Then I met another brother who was a twin.  There were just tons of brothers.  (Eyeroll..laughing)  Never ever did I think Anthony would someday be my boyfriend let alone husband.
S: Is that a good thing?
M: Of course, I don’t kow what I would do without him!
Dating:
S:  Where was your first date and who’s decision was it to go there?
M:  First real date or the second first date?
S: Lets go with the first.
M: Well, I was stood up for the first date.  I don’t know how or why I even gave him a second chance after standing me up.  I was so angry that I gave up my Friday night skiing to go out with a guy that I wasn’t even sure I liked.  His voice was so deep and loud.  (laughing) Should have been the first sign of running the other way. (laughing)
S:  Where was your favorite place to go as a couple?
M:  We loved going to this place to eat called the Wooden Nickel.
S: What is the Wooden Nickel?
M:  It was an old time resteraunt in North Brunswick that had stuff like steak and french onion soup. We would go for the late night menu on Friday night.  They would have a movie in the bar area and they would serve popcorn and food.
S:  That seems fun. Where else did you two go?
M:  I remember going to car shows in New York and meeting Lou Firigno, the incrediblehulk.  We liked to go skiing, we would also go ice skating even thou we weren’t good at it. We would do that often in the winter.
S:  You were a very adventerous couple.
M: Yes, we were. It’s a shame the generation these days aren’t.
S: I know, right?
S: Did you ever break up while dating?  Why or why not?
M:  Oh yes, many times. (laughing)  We would break up over his job, being that he was four years older then me and out of school already he had a full time job that required a lot of weekend work.  That would make me feel like we never went out on the weekends like young people should so we would fight over that.  God how stupid now when you think about it now. (rolls eyes, while laughing)
S:  Did you ever think you would wind up getting married?  Why or why not?
M:  No way! (laughing)  I never would have ever thought I would marry this person.  Seemed we came from such different backrounds.  (laughing) Never ever thought I would marry a truck driver…
S:  Can you tell me some more stories about dating, maybe how your family felt?
M:  Dating was always an adventure.  We would set out planning one thing then of course not doing it and doing something else that was not even an option.  It was hard to ever make real plans.  People did not think we were right for each other, not young people like we were I guess, what Im saying is the parents.  Really my parents, they did not think that he was what they had in mind for their daughter.  He was a truck driver.  Guess all parents think there daughters are going to marry a docto or lawyer. (laughing) Yea right wishful thinking..

Proposal:
S:  What date and where were you proposed to?
M:  I can’t remember.  Wow is that bad?
S:  No, I have heard a lot of couples say that.
M:  I really can’t remember any part of it. I guess it wasn’t exciting who knows..
But, wait maybe this never happened and were not really married.  Haha funny me! (being sarcastic)

Engagement:
S:  How long were you dating before you got engaged?
M:  Four years.
S:  That’s not too bad! And who did you tell about your engagement first?
M:  I told my best friends mother first.  Um, I know my parents would not be happy, so I heisted telling my parents that why I told Aunt Maria’s mom first.
S:  And how did they react to the news?
M:  Everyone thought we were too young, especially me.  There was talk that I was pregnant which was not true.
S:  So, I’m assusimg you didn’t have an engagement Party? 
M:  No, I didn’t want one because I thought it was too much. You know a shower and all that, I just didn’t want it. (shrugging shoulders)
S:  Is there anything you would change about the engagement process?
M:  No, not really.  We had a short-lived engagement and we wanted it that way!

Wedding (Planning):
S:  What were the venues you had in mind for your wedding?
M:  I wanted an outside wedding at home.
S:  What did you look forward to?
M:  The so called dress…(laughing) I did not want a wedding gown, I wanted a dress! 
S:  That’s unique. And what were you least looking forward to in terms of planning for your wedding?
M:  Fighting with my mother.  (grunting) We argued over everything.  It was like it wasn’t even my wedding.  Oh, it was a nightmare that I didn’t even want to go to. (laughing)
S:  What was the hardest part about planning for your wedding?
M:  Keeping it small and not having the world come.
S:  And the easiest?
M:  All of it.  I was not involved at my mother’s choice.  She did what she wanted, what colors and food she wanted.  Oh there were so many fights, I can still here all the yelling, I wanted to run away and just elope.
S:  How did you feel about the overall wedding planning process?
M:  Like it was not even my wedding and I just gave up.
S:  Can you tell me some more stories about planning for you wedding?
M:  Now sorry as I didn’t get to plan my wedding.  I did get to pick out two different dresses. Wow and my mother was not with me. Wahoo…(sarcastically)

Wedding (Day):
S:  Where was your wedding held?
M:  Well, I actually had two different days.
S: How so?
M: I got married on the 27th of August and had my reception that Saturday.  We got married by the judge in Franklin Township.
S: Why did you have two different days?
M: The judge would only do the marriage during the week. So, we had it one day and the reception on a different day.
S:  What time was your wedding at?
M:  Eleven in the morning.
S:  How did you feel on your wedding day?
M:  I was nervous, who wouldn’t be.  It’s a big life changer.
S: That’s true for anyone.
S:  Did anything go wrong? 
M:  The day of the vows, so many people showed up to be with us, they had to clear out the court room and allow us to use it.  The judge screwed up the vows and asked the man do you take this man to be your husband.  The room got real quiet and everyone was laughing.  Stupid Judge.  I didn’t find it funny.
S:  Can you tell me some more stories about your wedding day?
M:  Oh the day of our vows, the best man was very late, as he broke his leg right before we got married.
S: Wow, that sucks.

Honeymoon:
S:  Where was your honeymoon?
M:  We didn’t have one right away; we went to Hawaii a year later.  We spent the night at a hotel.  I can’t even remember the name of the hotel.
S:  And how did you feel being newlyweds?
M:  It felt ok, nothing new really.
S:  Would you change anything about your honeymoon? 
M:  Sure, I wish we could have had one right away, but I just started a new job and couldn’t get vacation. 
S: Bad timing I guess. Can you tell me some more stories about your honeymoon, what did the room look like, how long was the flight?
M:  I remember we watched TV and daddy falling asleep. Some things never change.  Take that as a hint. (laughing) When we had a honeymoon a year later we went to Hawaii, the room was beautiful it was a brand new hotel the flight was just awful.  It was seventeen hours with delays.  I thought your father would die during take off, he turned green he had never flown before. (laughing)

As Newlyweds:
S:  What kind of things did you do as newlyweds?
M:  Nothing different.
S:  How did your relationship change?
M:  We were just together more.  Had to share my bed and house, oh joy.
S:  Looking back today is there anything you would change? 
M:  No not really, it’s all been good.

Having children:
S:  How long after you were married did you decide on having children?
M:  Eight years later we decided to start a family since I married so young.
S:  That’s a long time after. How did that make you feel?
M:  I was scared.
S:  Did you want a girl or a boy? 
M:  I wanted a girl, but all I really cared about was having a healthy child.
S:  So, what were you looking forward to the most about having children?
M:  Being a mom and when you got older being the boss!  My rules! (laughing)
S:  What were you least looking forward to about having children?
M:  Loss of sleep. I lost a lot, you never wanted to sleep.
S: Sounds like me. (laughing)

Hard times:
S:  What has been the hardest in your marriage?
M:  Having a very hard pregnancy and spending six months in the hospital away from my husband.
S: Did he spend time with you?
M: He would come home from work and go straight to the hospital.
S:  What would you like to change in your marriage?
M:  I wish that daddy would work less. 
S:  Can you tell me about some difficulties throughout your marriage from the past until today?
M:  My mom passing away and my dad not being able to really take care of himself.  Having to give up my home and move in with him as he would not move.  Having open-heart surgery just a few weeks ago has been very hard.  Not just on me but also on my family. (teary eyed)
S: We are a close family, so thankfully not much has stoppped us from constantly loving one another.
M: Yup, that’s true.

Overall:
S:  What would you like to see different in your marriage today?
M:  I would like to be able to see my husband work less not more. 
S:  How has your love for another grown stronger?
M:  You don’t think your love could grow stronger when you love someone, but it does happen.  It is amazing what my husband did for my father for many many years, and when the end for my father grew he just became even more amazing of a husband.  He did so much for a man that was not even his father.
S:  What do you think makes your husband your everything?
M:  He is just the best person ever.  He will do whatever it takes to take care of his family.
S: That’s how it should be, I’m glad he’s my dad.
S:  What do you love the most about him?
M:  How he cares so much about his family.
S:  What would you like to change about him?M:  How much he works.

S:  Have you ever thought about renewing you vows?
M:  Nope, why do you need to do that?  It in sickness and health to death do up part. It’s says that the first time around.
S:  That makes sense. Can you tell me anything else about you life together thus far?
M:  Life is strange, people sometimes are opposite and maybe that is what makes it work.  Life has it’s up and downs but overall life is good!


Male Subject:
Basic Questions

S: What is your name?
A: Anthony Giannotto.
S: What is your gender?
M: Male
S:  What did you imagine your future husband/wife to be when you were a child?
A:  A don’t know…nice.
S:  Did you date anyone else before meeting one another?  Why or why not?
A:  No.
S:  Why not.
A: No need to.
S: How did you meet one another?
A:  Party.
S:  How old were you?
A:  uh…eighteen.
S:  What were your first impressions?
A:  Woooooow. (with enthusiasm and wide eyes)
S:  Can you tell me a particular story about meeting for the first time?
A: I went to a party with my twin brothers that I was not really invited to.  I didn’t really know anyone and I made a comment about a salad and the girl that made it heard me and got a little bent over it.  (Red faced)
S:  How do you think your husband/wife felt upon meeting for the first time?
A: It was fun.
S: What did you learn or take from meeting for the first time compared to being together now?
A: Nothing.
S:  Can you tell me some more stories about meeting?
A:   There really wasn’t anything else I can remember.
S:  Where was your first date and who’s decision was it to go there?
A:  Drive in movie theatre.
S: Who’s decision was it?
A: Mine.
S:  Where was your favorite place to go as a couple?
A:  Drive in movies.
S:  Where were some places you remember going while you were dating?
A:  Skiing on the weekends.
S:  Did you ever break up while dating?  Why or why not?
A:  No.
S:  Did you ever think you would wind up getting married?  Why or why not?
A:  Yes.
S: Why’s that?
A: I just did.

-Proposal:

S:  Do you remember anything from your proposal considering there really wasn’t much?
A: No.

-Engagement:
S:  How long were you dating before you got engaged?
A:  I don’t know, I can’t remember. Maybe two years.
S:  Who did you tell about your engagement first?
A:  Everybody.
S:  And how did they react to the news?
A:  Wow, nice.
S:  Is there anything you would change about the engagement process?  Why or why not?
A:  No, not really. 
S:  Can you tell me some more stories about your engagement?
A:  There really isn’t anything to tell.

-Wedding (Planning):
S:  What were the venues you had in mind for your wedding?
A:  Outside wedding, backyard.
S:  What was the hardest part about planning for your wedding?
A: Nothing.
S: Are you sure there was nothing?
A: Nothing.
S:  What was the easiest part about planning for you wedding?
A: All of it.
S:  Can you tell me some more stories about planning for you wedding?
A: Not really, I didn’t do anything.

 -Wedding Day:
S:  Where was your wedding held?
A:  At the..uh..backyard.
S:  What time was your wedding?
A: Oooooh..uhh..about one o’clock, I guess.
S:  What kind of emotions did you have on your wedding day?
A: Wow…nice…excited.
S:  Did you remember anything in particular about your wedding day?
A: Just to have fun.

-Honeymoon:
S:  Where was your honeymoon?
A:  Uh..we didn’t have a honey moon. We uh, went to Hawaii a year later.
S:  How did you feel being newlyweds?
A:  Ok.
S:  Would you change anything about your honeymoon?  Why or why not? 
A:  No.
S: Stories?
A: No.

-As Newlyweds:
S:  What kind of things did you do as newlyweds?
A:  I don’t know.
S:  Was it different?  The Same?
A:   The same.
S:  How did your relationship change?
A:  It didn’t.
S:  Looking back today is there anything you would change?  Why?
A:  Not to argue. (laughing)

-Having children:
S:  How long after you were married did you decide on having children?
A:  I don’t know, mom’s choice.
S:  Did you want a girl or a boy?  Why?
A:  Whatever was healthy.
S:  What were you looking forward to the most about having children?
A:  Being a good father!
S:  And what about the least?
M:  Nothing.

-Hard times:
S:  What has been the hardest in your marriage?
A:  Getting along. (laughing)
S:  What would you like to change in your marriage?
A:  Nothing.
S:  Can you tell me about some difficulties throughout your marriage from the past until today?
A:  No..nope..not at all.

-Overall:
S:  What would you like to see different in your marriage today?
A:  Nothing.
S:  How has your love for another grown stronger?
A:  Yeah of course, it just grew over time.
S:  What makes your wife your everything?
A: She is a great wife and great mother.
S:  What do you love the most about your wife?
A:  Everything..she’s good.
S:  What would you like to change about your wife?
A:  Nothing.
S:  Have you ever thought about renewing you vows?  Why?
A:  No. It’s good.
S:  Can you tell me anything else about you life together thus far?
A:  Nope.


The questions were shortened due to the subject.
The subject being a male, did not have much to say. 

Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Blog 21

Blog #21: Post reflections on what you learned from your short analysis project  (what you need to do, how to do it, and how what you learned will apply to your research project).

I feel like I have a lot to work on, from my introduction, to organization, to my research. I feel over time I will feel more confident with my paper as time goes on and we work on each part separately in class. 

1.) I need to work on a stronger introduction, where I give information that is related to my topic. This will help to introduce my topic/research question. I feel like I should create an outline as it will help better organize my thoughts better. In my short analysis I did open my introduction paragraph with an interesting thought, but I feel like it should have related to my question better. Therefore, I need to make sure that my introduction is interesting and it intertwines with my question.

2.) I learned that I need to speak more about my data/observation. In doing so, I am giving my readers a sense of what my observations prove. In my short analysis, my chart describes the complexity of comments and I should explain my chart in full details. In terms of my research project, I can make a chart or another form to represent my findings when conducting my research.

3.)  I need to work on my organization better. I need to make sure that the information I say, fits where I put it. I noticed that throughout my analysis I put information in a spot where it did not necessarily belong. I may find it beneficial to create an outline so my thoughts are in the right paragraphs. For my research project, I need to pay close attention where I put my information, otherwise it may throw my important ideas off. 

4.)  I need to explain how I came to my conclusions. I give a lot of good information based on my observations and ideas. I need to give a detailed description of how I arrived at my conclusions. I just need to apply them to my question better in my conclusion. For my research project, I need to be sure to do just this by connecting my observations to my descriptions.  


Thursday, November 15, 2012

Blog 20


Blog #20: Write a note to me that reflects on what you have written so far for your introduction + review of the research.  In this note, comment on the following.

  "How do women tell stories differently than men do?"

1.  What are the strengths your writing for the introduction?  What do you need to work on?
I am not sure what my strengths were, although, I do feel that I did an okay job describing my topic and giving some information regarding what I plan on mentioning throughout the body of my paper. I feel like I need to do a better job in terms of organization. Overall, I feel like i'm just writing without having any prior outline or anything to work with. I am confusing myself. 

What are the strengths of your writing for the review of the 
literature?  What do you need to work on?
I felt somewhat confident with my literature review section, but more so for Tannen's work. I am still confused with Gilligan's work, so I need to include that in my review as well when I comprehend that better. I feel like I explained Tannen's viewpoint, but to intertwine with my research question? I'm not sure about that. I need to explain their ideas better. 

2. What is the research problem identified in your introduction?  How do you point out what your research project will contribute toward resolving this "problem"?  In other words, what have you written about  the importance of your project for writing studies?
The problem I addressed, I think, has to do with the idea that society believes that women talk more, when it fact it is men who talk more. In a relationship, men bottle up their emotions and women tend to think men don't care, when that is their way of showing that they do. I am confused when it comes to this part. I am hoping to conclude how men and women speak about relationships.


3. What have other researchers found out about your topic that is relevant to your research project?

Other researchers have found that men don't speak about their emotions, because they like to avoid arguments. They like to look masculine and they like to have power over women. Many researchers mentioned how women speak differently than men, how it is somewhat different languages. When it comes to relationships men aren't as in depth as women are.

4.  How do you connect findings from question 3 to the purpose of your project?
Well, I use quotes and summarize what the authors had to same about my topic, although, there is plenty I hope to change to make it flow better. Findings from question 3 will interlock with the purpose of my project, as if they are written by the same person rather than different people. I hope to connect more findings with my purpose. 

5.  What is your plan for finishing/revising your introduction and literature review?
I would like to revise this section after I receive feedback from Dr. Chandler. I don't plan on going on until I feel confident with this section, considering it makes or breaks the actual paper.  Hopefully after understanding Gilligan's book, I can add her thoughts to this literature section as well. Also, if I find it necessary to speak about conversations between boys and girls and how they relate to men and women's conversations I may add information from my third article as well, which will change this section. 

6.  What feedback do you want from me?
-I would like to know what to keep and what to change pretty much.
-I need help with organization, in terms of outlining the most.
- I would also appreciate if again, you would sum up Gillian's book for me.
- I feel like I understand what is expected, but then when I read what I wrote I feel like I didn't make the proper connections or what I chose had nothing to do with my research question.

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Blog 19


Blog #19: Post a draft introduction and literature review for your research essay.  The more writing you post - the more you will have to work with on Thursday.  This does not need to be perfect.  It can include questions, requests for help, and drafty sentences that you know you will need to re-write.  The point is to get started on this!!!

Introduction & Literature Review for Research Study

INTRODUCTION

In society today, there are many stereotypes between men and women. Women are said to be excessive talkers and rather emotional. Men on the other hand, are said to be more on the quiet side and like to bottle up their emotions. Stereotypes have also been determined that in a relationship, women have more to say than men do about the same topics, stories, feelings, and thoughts that may occur.  The goal of my research is to determine if this is true or if these ideas are indeed stereotypes that we as human beings believe. Studies have proved to find that men talk more than women in all, if not most conversational areas.
     How do women tell stories differently than that of men? How do men and women whom share the same stories, express their emotions? How do hand movements and eye contact play a part in the features of the actual storytelling? In my research below, I will explore how men and women engage in conversations and how women tell stories of love and romance differently than that of men.

LITERATURE REVIEW
In “You Just Don’t Understand: Women and Men in Conversation” by Deborah Tannen, she finds that men talk too much and women on the other hand talk less but express themselves more. Tannen elaborates on the fact that men and women do in fact have different ways of speaking and it is important to note how. She states, “Many women and men feel dissatisfied with their close relationships and become even more frustrated when they try to talk things out” (Tannen, pg. 17). This gives an idea how men and women feel when it comes to expressing their emotions when it comes to their significant other.
     How men and women converse is like a language of their own based on gender. Tannen explains, “If women speak and hear a language of connections and intimacy, while men speak and hear a language of status and independence, then communication between men and women can be like cross cultural communication, prey to clash of conversational styles”  (Tannen, pg. 42). Each gender plays a role in how they talk and how their language is interpreted.
     Tannen also believed that men took more pleasure in having strength and being the protector because this attracts women, and therefore the men receive emotional feelings of pleasure and satisfaction of being with their loved one. She mentioned that men and women have different ideas of what they find important and that is why they tell stories and express emotions differently and not the same.
     Women seem to gossip more than men do and in which this is an obligation in a woman’s life.  Tannen tells a story in which a women tells a story of her breakup over and over again, because if she did not mention this to all her close friends they would feel neglected if they found this out from a different individual. The man in this situation decided that it was best not to tell a soul and continue his daily routines as if nothing has changed. The woman in this case had more to say, but that is because women tell stories of romance in more detail than that of men, who may not express themselves as clearly as the women do.
      In my other source, “In a Different Voice” by Carol Gilligan she expresses that women’s relationships are more mysterious than more difficult to describe. She feels that women’s relationships have a lot more to do with that of imagery (Gilligan, pg. 25). Gilligan tends to mention that women are misunderstood and how theories have been built around observations of men in terms of conversation.
     In conclusion, studies have proved that men are the ones who talk more overall, but when it comes to a relationship women are the ones who are more expresses and tend to show more interest in the topic. Men and women have different ways of communication, especially when it comes to intimacy rather than when men are talking to their friends about sports or a meeting at work.

Questions:
** I need help with interpreting Gilligan’s book, it was very confusing to me**

-Looking through my sources I was wondering if i should speak about how boys converse growing up and how girls converse? I have been reading A LOT about how childhood plays a part in the conversations of men and women as they grow into adults. If so, what kind of questions should I ask my subjects?